Timing Test

I've created a quick timing mock up using After Effects of the rough animation I have so far. I feel that overall the timing is not too bad, but there are a few places where the scenes may need extending before or after a cut to help with flow.

Bottle Scene

This scene is from the octopus' second wooing attempt, where he retrieves a piece of paper from a bottle in order to write the anemone a love letter.

More Work In Progress